Skitch's Audition.

[Skitchs Audition]

Abruptly, Skitch raised her muzzle from her paws. Her ears pulled taught as she took in the scents of the evening. These parts were knew to her, and never before had she smelt such obscure things. Everything seemed dirty here, and everything had it's own strange, new smell.
The female dog dropped let her muzzle drop back into her paws, her folded haunches momentarily shifting in a somewhat uneasy manner. Rolling onto her hip, she stretched out on her side for a few moments, listlessly watching the shadows of passing people dance accross her small, dank alley.
The sun was starting it's slow defeat, gradually sinking lower in the sky, it's bright rays blocked by the tall buildings. Skitch would wait, patiently and silently until the light was overpowered by the darkness of night. Instinct told her it would be much safer then.

<( OOC: I'm sorry.. I'm very, very rusty. I've also never RolePlayed on a messageboard properly.. so.. I hope this meets your standards. Also, if any of you 'board veterans' out there have tips they're willing to share.. throw 'em my way. :3 )>

[WTF]

Wait a second.. why the hell did Pregnant end up in my post!?
I assume it's because I wrote 'female dog'. Blasted filters.. My apolgies, however.
NOTE: Skitch is NOT pregnant, that was just a typo on my behalf.

[.::Tyrant::.]

That's fine, really. Quite good actually. But you definately could describe things a lot more. What exactly does she smell? What are her surroundings lik? Where /exactly/ is she lying? What does she look like? What breed is she?
Answer all these questions, and any more you can think of, and it'll help readers create an image of your character lying there and stuff.
But I ike the bit about the shadows, and the sun.'Tis good. Accepted! -stamps-