Scooby's Audition

[Scoobyguest for now]

A English cocker Spaniel wandered the streets. She sniffed the ground, trying to find food. She saw something, but it turned out to be an empty hamburger wrapper. The cocker spaniel was thin, and she was covered in filth. When humans kicked her. She'd crawl away. But then she had been kicked one too many times. She bit the humans arm in an attempt for freedom. Now she wandered the streets, but her searches were in vain. She could not find food. She looked at her body. She had a black head with a black back. She had a white stomach, with small black spots on it. A black collar indacated her name. Scooby.

[.::Tyrant::.]

Ok, but please use a lot more description and make it clear exactly what Scooby is doing. try to write more, and if you talk about Scooby's past, maybe make a new paragraph and go into it in more detail. Make sure everything in your post makes sense and is clear.

Try posting here again, taking my tips on board. The same sort of post, but longer and with more description.